雅思寫作思路必備--大作文（一）

很多同學(xué)在準(zhǔn)備雅思的過(guò)程當(dāng)中，總會(huì)發(fā)現(xiàn)自己的作文分?jǐn)?shù)一直上不去。那么，留學(xué)監(jiān)理網(wǎng)的老師就來(lái)帶大家分析一下應(yīng)該如何提高雅思大作文的寫作能力。 

首先，與中考和高考語(yǔ)文考試的作文一樣，雅思寫作考試的第一步也是非常關(guān)鍵的一步就是審題。如果你的寫作分?jǐn)?shù)與你平時(shí)練習(xí)時(shí)的水平出入過(guò)大，那么你在考場(chǎng)八成是跑題了。那么如何審題呢，留學(xué)監(jiān)理網(wǎng)的老師就用《劍橋雅思真題5》Test2的大作文來(lái)給大家做一個(gè)示范。 

本題的題目如下：

In some countries young people are encouraged to work or travel for a year between finishing high school and starting university studies.

Discuss the advantages and disadvantages for young people who decide to do this.

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

這個(gè)文章考查的是考生是否能就某一事件/觀點(diǎn)的好處與壞處進(jìn)行觀點(diǎn)闡述和舉例支持的能力。這里，考官?zèng)]有讓你闡述自己的觀點(diǎn)，所以，如果你的開頭是這樣的：There are many advantages and disadvantages of having a gap year. But I think having a gap year is great. 那么，你的寫作分?jǐn)?shù)一定高不了了，因?yàn)槟銓忣}不清，導(dǎo)致了跑題。 

明確了文章的寫作目的之后，我們應(yīng)該快速地進(jìn)行頭腦風(fēng)暴并寫出一個(gè)簡(jiǎn)要的提綱(outline)。我們需要至少想出2個(gè)advantage和2個(gè)disadvantage。

我們的留學(xué)監(jiān)理網(wǎng)的老師也為大家寫出了一個(gè)提綱作為參考：

Advantage:

Gain some work experience: improve interpersonal ability--good for the team work

Know themselves better--choose their major according to interests 

Disadvantage:

Lose interest in academic work--never go back to college

Safety hazard: accident/car crash/fight/conflict/crime/terrorism 

接下來(lái)，我們就要開始進(jìn)行寫作了。為了更好地幫助大家進(jìn)行寫作，留學(xué)監(jiān)理網(wǎng)的老師給大家提供一些套用句型，請(qǐng)大家仔細(xì)學(xué)習(xí)。

開頭：

The advantages and disadvantages of this development / trend / technology / idea will be explored in this essay.

The benefits and drawbacks of this development / trend / technology / plan will be explored in the following essay.

In this essay, I intend to / aim to identify the advantages and disadvantages of this development / trend / technology / idea / plan.

結(jié)尾：

Taking all the factors into consideration / account, I am convinced that the benefits / drawbacks of ___________ far outweigh its drawbacks / benefits..

With all aspects carefully considered, I claim that ______________.

最后，我們的老師還為大家寫了一篇參考范文，希望可以對(duì)大家有所幫助。

Sample Response:

There is a debate on if young people should be encouraged to work or travel for a year after they graduate from high school and before they go to college. In my essay, both advantages and disadvantages of this notion will be discussed.

One of the advantages of taking a gap year is that it gives the young adults a great opportunity to think what they want to do and in what they are interested. They have been busy with their studies at high schol for several years and never have time to really think about their future. They’ll find out it is crucial for them to set a goal of career development and the first step to do so is to realize what their passion is. Obviously, taking a year travel or work gives those students some time to figure out what path and major they want to choose.

However, those young adults may pursue economic success rather than academic achievement and will never go back to college. Some of them are lack of judgement and will be easily affected by this impetuous society. They believe going to college will not ganrantee a promising future so they would rather start their career as early as possible in order to gain some practical experience and earn some money. What they don’t know is all the high-end professions require good education. If their parents are not aware of their children’s choice, nobody will keep them on the right track. Their future would be unpredictable.

Taking all the factors into consideration, I am convinced that taking a gap year is good for the young adults. But it’s essential for them to go back to college on time; as a result, I advocate that both their parents and teachers should keep an eye on them and give them supports, suggestions and guidance when it’s necessary.

（注：本范文分?jǐn)?shù)約為6.5-7.0）

希望今天的講解可以給大家起到拋磚引玉的作用。請(qǐng)大家認(rèn)真研究考題，多進(jìn)行寫作練習(xí)。

祝大家取得成功！

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