雅思寫作開頭分?jǐn)?shù)不高的原因是……

2017年11月25日的雅思考試已經(jīng)向考鴨們逼近了，關(guān)于雅思寫作，留學(xué)監(jiān)理網(wǎng)的小編認(rèn)為是比較難拿高分的，它考察了詞匯量、語法、句型以及邏輯思維能力等多方面能力。因此，考鴨們一定要對雅思寫作引起高度重視。那么在雅思寫作中需要注意哪些問題呢?

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如果你的雅思寫作部分還沒有準(zhǔn)備好的話，一定要看留學(xué)監(jiān)理網(wǎng)的小編給大家整理的這篇文章，這些雅思寫作中致命的減分項考鴨們切記不要有。

中式英文

Topic 1-The happiest moment in your life

In our life, there are always some moments which make your heart floweropened angrily……

Topic 2- The population problem

The population problem is a very big problem. For example, in the citycenters of Shanghai, we can always see people mountain people sea there.

Topic3- Is there fairness in today’s business world?

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I think in today’s society, there is no fairness in the business world. Forexample, I always chopped when I go out buy things……

Topic 4- The advantage of being a nice person

Being a nice person have many advantage. I believe if a people always dobad things, he will get “baoying”.

觀點模糊態(tài)度曖昧

Topic-Should college students be allowed to get married?

I think this topic is very hard to say. Because I am still very little,only 17, and not married, so this topic is very difficult for me……

偏離主題

Topic-It is said that nowadays one can not acquire thequalifications and quality essential to success through university education. Towhat extent do you agree or disagree with the statement? (雅思真題)

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I think to success, we must have a lot of important qualities. To havethese important qualities, we must learn a lot of things, for example, English,music tools, and etc. We can learn these qualities from our teachers, ourfriends and from books. All in all, we can learn from many places.

語法錯誤慘不忍睹

Topic-If children behave badly, should their parents acceptresponsibility and also be punished? (雅思真題)

About this problem, my think is if children behave badly, then parents arenot right. Because teach child is parent’s responsibility. So we also punishparents too besides children is also should.

過分簡單沒有重點

Topic-The importance of environmental protection

This issue is surely very important, let’s talk about it!

用詞不當(dāng) 表達(dá)不準(zhǔn)

Topic-Should college students be allowed to get married?

I think college students should not be allowed to get married because theyare very young and so we can’t take the responsibility to form a family.

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意思重復(fù)原地踏步

Topic-Your opinion on DINK families

My opinion on DINK families is that DINK families is not a good thing. Andit is a bad thing. It brings no benefits to our society and it is even sometimesharmful to our society.

中國俗語胡亂翻譯

Topic 1-Is it good to have a large family?

I think it is good to have a large family. Because we Chinese believe asentence: “Many sons, many lucks”……

正確說法：Happiness lies in having many children

Topic 2 -Should we pretend to know everything or admit our ignorance?

We all know, our Chinese old fathers and grandfathers said: “Know is know,don’t know is don’t know”……

Topic 3- Do you think one’s character is greatly influenced by his/herfamily?

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Chinese old words says very good: Dragon born dragon, phoenix born phoenix,rat’s son can make hole……

Topic 4- The advantage of being a nice person

I believe one sentence:“A good person is all life safe”. We Chinese peoplealways say: “Good has good pay, bad has bad pay”.

觀點武斷 態(tài)度強硬

Topic1-The importance of confidence

In my opinion, confidence is the most important thing for a person. All thesuccessful people in the world are full of confidence. While those people whodon’t have confidence, they all have failed.

Topic 2 - The solution to the traffic problem

I think to solve the traffic problem, very easy! For those who don’t obeythe traffic rules, we should put all of them into prison. If we do that, I’msure there will be no traffic problem any more.

上述的錯誤有考鴨中槍嗎？如果你還在為雅思寫作復(fù)習(xí)而煩惱，就來看下一下四點備考建議吧！

雅思寫作備考建議：

1. 當(dāng)你想要表達(dá)自己有什么觀點時或者其他情況，不要老是用see，say等。盡量用更加詳細(xì)的詞匯描述，例如see可以用perceive, understand，realize，recognize等。Say可以用speak，utter，vocalize，indicate，read，repeat等更加生動形象的去描述。

2. 盡量用些比較不常用的詞匯，看起來很厲害的樣子，但前提是你一定要完全理解所用詞匯的意思，如果怕用錯的話最好不要用，不要弄巧成拙了哦!

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3. 作文中非常常用的就是在接連兩段話會用到一些詞匯，這時大家要盡量使用有新意的詞

4. 有空的話可以關(guān)注健康，教育，財經(jīng)，政策，動物方面的新聞，好多考題都是最近動向來著

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以上就是留學(xué)監(jiān)理網(wǎng)的小編為大家整理的雅思寫作中需要注意的問題。希望大家在雅思寫作考試中盡量避免這些問題的出現(xiàn)。更多有關(guān)雅思考試的干貨分享敬請關(guān)注留學(xué)監(jiān)理網(wǎng)。

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